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Post by Sean Mason on Apr 22, 2009 16:06:09 GMT -5
Post your "The Truth" Tyler Lucas Feedback here! Your fist RP was a pretty good read. The first part "Leaving nCw" Felt a little rushed. But overall it was a good read. I can't wait to see more
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Post by Tyler Lucas on Apr 22, 2009 16:17:08 GMT -5
thanks bro
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Post by nolarayne on Apr 22, 2009 16:28:57 GMT -5
was really good, I enjoyed reading it =)
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Post by Tyler Lucas on Apr 28, 2009 22:12:57 GMT -5
first rp first redemption is up
whadda ya think?
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Post by nolarayne on Apr 29, 2009 2:32:15 GMT -5
was a very good rp, kept me reading and wasnt boring =)
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Post by spikekane on Apr 29, 2009 12:34:45 GMT -5
Not too shabby Mr Lucas.
Keep up the good work dude, cause Milo can definatly bring the thunder. I think this could steal match of the nigh quite easily with the calibre of roleplays.
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Post by Tyler Lucas on Apr 29, 2009 16:28:34 GMT -5
thanks both of you
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Post by Sean Mason on Apr 29, 2009 19:20:20 GMT -5
Very nice RP man... Kind of comical though. He was sitting at the diner eating where everyone could see him. Then after coming out of the bathroom tells everyone to get down, and not look at them lol. I think Tyler could be a little screwed being all those people seen him, and they just got to be KWF fans
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Post by Tyler Lucas on May 3, 2009 12:21:34 GMT -5
my second rp is up for redemption sorry it would have been longer but i rushed it bcuz im bout to goto the zoo
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Post by Tyler Lucas on May 8, 2009 16:45:12 GMT -5
my first is up i only had time to do the titles of the scenes, im in a rush feedback is appreciated
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