Kidd Karnage
High Mid carder
THE HARDCORE KING OF ULTRAVIOLENCE
Posts: 125
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Post by Kidd Karnage on Apr 15, 2009 18:17:01 GMT -5
please!?!?!?!
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Post by Sean Mason on Apr 17, 2009 21:58:08 GMT -5
Pretty good RP. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work
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Kidd Karnage
High Mid carder
THE HARDCORE KING OF ULTRAVIOLENCE
Posts: 125
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Post by Kidd Karnage on Apr 17, 2009 22:03:54 GMT -5
haha thanx bro.
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Post by Shane Hunter on Apr 17, 2009 22:27:21 GMT -5
Just read the roleplay and I like it. The content is all very solid and the presentation is spot on in my opinion. The use of color is just right and makes the rp easy to follow and centering a rp always makes it look neater and tidy.
"I - AM - NOT - AFRAID, TO LIGHT UP THE WHOLE BUILDING IN A BURNING FLAME THAT WOULD MAKE SATAN HIMSELF…piss his pants." Just wanted to point out that this line made me chuckle.
Good work all round Kidd.
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Kidd Karnage
High Mid carder
THE HARDCORE KING OF ULTRAVIOLENCE
Posts: 125
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Post by Kidd Karnage on Apr 17, 2009 22:37:34 GMT -5
haha thanx much dude. I was hoping i could make somebody laugh with at least one of my lines.
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Post by Shane Hunter on Apr 17, 2009 22:52:12 GMT -5
Yeah, that one just stood out to me. As I was reading it I instantly thought DAMN I wish I had written that!! lol
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